The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This
line graph depicts monthly alteration regularity in three metals’ prices within 2014.
In
a glance, the Change preposition
At
prices
change percentages in copper and nickel decreased, Fix the agreement mistake
price
while
a slight increase was identified on
the zinc category, over the period stated. Change preposition
in
Further
, nickel was notified
as the highest percentage Replace the word
noticed
then
became the lowest one at the end
of the period and the
copper experienced the same trend, whilst Correct article usage
apply
the
zinc was the only metal Correct article usage
apply
had
an increase.
Correct pronoun usage
that had
Initially
, on
January, the nickel category stood at 6% and suddenly
dropped to -3% Change preposition
in
on
June. After which, it dramatically rose Change preposition
in
at the end
of the year by 4%. Likewise
, on
January, beginning at 2% was recognised on copper. Following that, an even lower proportion amounted Change preposition
in
in
-0.5 on the same metal after the next 5 months, prior to Change preposition
to
surge
to 1.5% on the final annual mentioned.
Correct article usage
a surge
Conversely
, the zinc proportion right over the early period started
at 1%, following
byWrong verb form
followed
2
% gradual decline in the six gap months. Correct article usage
a 2
In addition
, it climbed significantly to 2% on the twelfth.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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