the graph below shows the percentage of part _time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

This

bar chart illustrates the

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of

workers

who were working part-time in comparison to four countries in the United Kingdom

such

as England, Nothern Ireland, Scotland and

Wales

in the

years

1980 and 2012. It is clear from the graph that there were two factors to measure the fluctuations in the

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proportions

proportion

of part-time

employees

which are the year and the located country where

employees

were there. There is a noticeable difference between the

workers

in the

years

1980 and 2010 .Especially,

Soctlands

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Scotland

had the lowest part-time

workers

' rate in 1980 which was 1 to every 10

employees

worked less than full-time hours.

On the other hand

, Scotlands increased

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the rate in 2010 to reach 2 to every 10

employees

worked shift hours.

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closer examination of the figures for part-time

workers

revealed the greatest

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proportion

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that

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to

Wales

's

workers

in the

years

1980 and 2010 about 30% and 35% respectively .

Moreover

, the

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proportion

of England's

employees

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hitting the second rank in the both

years

of

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1980 and 2010 almost 25% and 30% respectively.

This

chart represents that

Wales

's people were

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working

higher in part-time than others.

Furthermore

, the government of

Wales

should

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the situation to find solutions.