The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The bar charts illustrate which careers the

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graduate and postgraduate

students

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went for after completing their degrees.

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, despite a distinct gap in the number of

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graduate and postgraduate

students

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, there was the same distribution regarding the popularity of their careers:

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study is the most popular destination, followed by part-time

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, unemployment, and voluntary

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(

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figure excluded the number of full-time

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). Looking at the

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graduates,

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study was by far the most preferable career option, which marked 29,665

students

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. In second place was part-time

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(17,735

students

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); Unemployment ranked third with 16,235. The least popular one was Voluntary

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, which was significantly lower than the other three destinations. Moving on to the careers of the

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postgraduates,

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study was the most common selection (2,725),

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, Part-time

work

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(2,535

students

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) trailed behind

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closely.

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, Unemployment registered third place(1,625) and Voluntary

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was way smaller proportion

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its counterpart.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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