The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate which careers the
UK
graduate and postgraduate students
went for after completing their degrees.
Overall
, despite a distinct gap in the number of UK
graduate and postgraduate students
, there was the same distribution regarding the popularity of their careers: further
study is the most popular destination, followed by part-time work
, unemployment, and voluntary work
(this
figure excluded the number of full-time work
).
Looking at the UK
graduates, further
study was by far the most preferable career option, which marked 29,665 students
. In second place was part-time work
(17,735 students
); Unemployment ranked third with 16,235. The least popular one was Voluntary work
, which was significantly lower than the other three destinations.
Moving on to the careers of the UK
postgraduates, Further
study was the most common selection (2,725), however
, Part-time work
(2,535 students
) trailed behind this
closely. Then
, Unemployment registered third place(1,625) and Voluntary work
was way smaller proportion like
its counterpart.Change preposition
than
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