The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables inform the audience about the
sales
of fairtrade goods such
as coffee and banana in years
1999 and 2004 in 5 European Correct article usage
the years
countries
. These countries
are UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.
Overall
, the countries
with highest
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the highest
sales
for
coffee in 1999 and 2004 Change preposition
of
was
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were
Switzerland
and UK
, respectively. Correct article usage
the UK
Switzerland
also
had the greatest number of sales
for fairtrade-labelled
bananas in both 1999 and 2004.
On the one hand, in 1999, Correct your spelling
fair trade-labelled
Switzerland
was the leading coffee seller with sales
of £3 million
, however
; in 2004 UK
surpassed it by having Correct article usage
the UK
sales
worth £20 million
. Out of all the 5 countries
, UK
and Belgium experienced Correct article usage
the UK
dramatic
shift in the volume of Add an article
a dramatic
sales
as the amount rose from 1.5 and 1 in 1999 to 20 and 17 in 2004, respectively. Apart from
this
, sales
for Switzerland
doubled in 2004 and countries
like Denmark and Sweden witnessed only a slight rise. However
, one common thing in all the countries
was the increase of
Change preposition
in
sales
in 2004.
On the other hand
, Switzerland
had a sale of £15 million
in 1999 for fairtrade-labelled bananas and it rose colossally in 2004 to an astonishing £47 million
. Sales
of countries
like UK
and Belgium in 2004 Correct article usage
the UK
was
5 times Correct subject-verb agreement
were
than
that in 1999. Change preposition
apply
Contrastingly
, Sweden saw a decrease from 1.8 in 1999 to £1 Rephrase
In contrast
million
in 2004, while
Denmark's figures also
dropped from 2 to £0.9 million
during the same period.Submitted by aggarwalparth2007 on
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