The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of
illiteracy
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around the world by region and by gender from the previous year.
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, it was estimated that the percentage of
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among
females
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was bigger than
males
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in any region. As the bar chart shows, in developed countries and
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, there were
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differences
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illiteracy
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rates between
females
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and
males
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. In developed countries, it was accounted that around 2% of
females
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experienced
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illiteracy
literacy
while
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among
males
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it was only nearly 1%. Meanwhile, in American Latin, it was estimated that about 12% of
females
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witnessed
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illiteracy
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it was only 10% of
males
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experienced
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.
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, in East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states, and South Asia, the
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comparative
number of
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between
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females
and
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significant. It was estimated the percentage of
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among
females
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were
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20%, around 48%, about 52%, and nearly 56%, respectively.
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among
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, it was accounted that the percentages of the inability
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read and write were about 8%, around 31%, nearly 30%, and around 34%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, females, males with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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