The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of
illiteracy
around the world by region and by gender from the previous year. Overall
, it was estimated that the percentage of illiteracy
among females
was bigger than males
in any region.
As the bar chart shows, in developed countries and Correct article usage
the Caribean
Caribean
, there were Correct your spelling
Caribbean
slightly
differences Change the adverb
slight
of
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in
illiteracy
rates between females
and males
. In developed countries, it was accounted that around 2% of females
experienced illteracy
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illiteracy
literacy
while
among males
it was only nearly 1%. Meanwhile, in American Latin, it was estimated that about 12% of females
witnessed illteracy
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illiteracy
besides
it was only 10% of males
experienced illiteracy
.
Moreover
, in East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab states, and South Asia, the comparation
number of Correct your spelling
comparative
illiteracy
between feamles
and Correct your spelling
females
males
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was
were
significant. It was estimated the percentage of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
illiteracy
among females
were
20%, around 48%, about 52%, and nearly 56%, respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
While
among males
, it was accounted that the percentages of the inability of
read and write were about 8%, around 31%, nearly 30%, and around 34%, respectively.Change preposition
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