The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
The expenditure
of
fast Change preposition
on
foods
including Fix the agreement mistake
food
hamburger
, fish and chips and pizza in Britain Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
by
per week is illustrated on the bar graph and Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the consumptions
consumptions
of these fast foods (1970-1990) Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
are
presented on the line graph.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Overall
, it is obvious that hamburger is generally the most consumable product for the high and the
Correct article usage
apply
average income
groups and Add a hyphen
average-income
this
trend increased constantly.
In terms of the
fast-food expenditure, Correct article usage
apply
hamburger
Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
is
accounted for the highest at around 42 pence per person per week, which was 10 pence higher than expenditure of the Unnecessary verb
apply
average income
people and almost three times higher than Add a hyphen
average-income
the
low-income people’s usage. Correct article usage
apply
However
, people with low-income
Correct your spelling
low income
tend
to use fish and chips which was nearly Wrong verb form
tended
same
allocation Correct article usage
the same
of
the people with high Change preposition
as
salary
, but Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
this
allocation was 8 pence less than the medium income
groups.
In terms of the line graph, the growing trends for hamburgers and pizzas Add a hyphen
medium-income
starts
from 100 Change the verb form
start
grammes
and 50 grammes
respectively in 1970. The consumptions
Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
for
hamburgers rose rapidly to 500 Change preposition
of
grammes
and the usage of pizza increased to 290 grammes
in 1990. However
, the highest consumption was
accounted for fish and chips at 300 Unnecessary verb
apply
grammes
in 1970 and it decreased gradually to 200 grammes
in 1982 and increase
again to reach Wrong verb form
increased
at
220 in 1990.Change preposition
apply
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