The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparizons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the variations in the amount of
Coffee
exported from Brazil and Colombia as well as
,Costa Rica from the period
2002 and2012
.The unit of measurement shown is in Kilograms (millions)
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and 2012
Overall
, the quantity of coffee
transfered
from Colombia Correct your spelling
transferred
flactuated
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fluctuated
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whereas
, the sum from Costa increased gradually.
From the period
2002 to 2006 the kilograms of Coffee
send
from Colombia increased dramatically but, after 2006 it marked a downward trend that was speedy and from 2008 it climbed quickly whilst,the exported Wrong verb form
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Coffee
from Costa Rica declined sharply and oscillated from 2006 to 2010 in contrast
, it moved upward up to the end of this
period
.
In Brazil, the million kilograms of Coffee
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slowly from 2002 to 2006 Wrong verb form
upsurged
however
, after 2006 the exported coffee
from
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fluactuated
for a Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
period
of approximatedly
four years.Correct your spelling
approximately
Besides
, from 2010 the mass of Coffee
sent rose swiftly.Submitted by karigaruvimbo on
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