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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparizons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparizons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the variations in the amount of
Coffee
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 exported from Brazil and Colombia
as well as
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 ,Costa Rica from the
period
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 2002
and2012
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and 2012
.The unit of measurement shown is in Kilograms (millions)
Overall
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, the quantity of
coffee
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transfered
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transferred
 from Colombia
flactuated
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fluctuated
fluctuate
whereas
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, the sum from Costa increased gradually. From the
period
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 2002 to 2006 the kilograms of
Coffee
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send
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sent
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 from Colombia increased dramatically but, after 2006 it marked a downward trend that was speedy and from 2008 it climbed quickly whilst,the exported
Coffee
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 from Costa Rica declined sharply and oscillated from 2006 to 2010
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, it moved upward up to the end of
this
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period
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. In Brazil, the million kilograms of
Coffee
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upsurge
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upsurged
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 slowly from 2002 to 2006
however
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, after 2006 the exported
coffee
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from
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apply
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fluactuated
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fluctuated
fluctuate
 for a
period
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 of
approximatedly
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approximately
 four years.
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, from 2010 the mass of
Coffee
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 sent rose swiftly.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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