The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
is a map that shows the possible Linking Words
area
for a public leisure Use synonyms
center
. Each Change the spelling
centre
area
has its own features Use synonyms
where
will be discussed in the following paragraphs below.
First and foremost, starting with the Correct word choice
which
west
Replace the word
western
area
(C) is the most different Use synonyms
between
the other two. Change preposition
from
This
is because it is dominated by Linking Words
tree
which become Fix the agreement mistake
trees
the
society's Correct article usage
apply
lung
as Fix the agreement mistake
lungs
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
contains
Correct subject-verb agreement
contain
lot
of oxygen for Add an article
a lot
public
. More than that, Add an article
the public
this
Linking Words
area
is Use synonyms
also
kind of secluded and difficult Linking Words
tobe
accessed by Correct your spelling
to be
citizen
as it doesn't connect with the main road.
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
On the other hand
, the city which Linking Words
become
the urban Wrong verb form
became
metroplitan
Correct your spelling
metropolitan
area
is located in the Use synonyms
center
of the map. It is obvious that Change the spelling
centre
this
location is the most Linking Words
strategist
and likely Replace the word
strategic
have
more Correct subject-verb agreement
has
opportunity
to be visited by people especially those who like to stay in tall buildings as Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
this
place has many of Linking Words
it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
The
Correct article usage
Last
last
but not least is the factory Linking Words
area
Use synonyms
where
is located Correct word choice
which
on
the east. Change preposition
in
This
specific Linking Words
area
is not only obviously Use synonyms
a
highly populated by workers, but Correct article usage
apply
also
an industrial place that makes the whole section Linking Words
is
busy from day to day Unnecessary verb
apply
as a result
Linking Words
from
producing stuff.Change preposition
of
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