The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below illustrate the information about a
town
in the present day and what it will look like in the future
and also
, the changes that are going to be there in the future
.
Overall
, in both maps, there is a Town
centre
and a Gas station as well as
, a Railway
line.
Currently, on the map, there is an Airfield on the North Western
side of the plan. Correct your spelling
northwestern
Moreover
,there is a railway
line running from North to South.Besides
, a Gas station is shown in the Western part of the Town
centre
.Again, there is a road that connects from
the Change preposition
apply
Town
centre
to the Roundabout that is
on the West of the Town
centre
.
Whereas
in the future
plan
there will be an Industrial estate that will be converted from the Airfield Add a comma
plan,
also
, there is going to be a road passing through the Industrial estate to the Railway
.Furthermore
, in the future
, a road named A4 is going to be added and it is going to be on
the Southwest of the Change preposition
in
Town
centre
also
, it is going to link with A2.Additionally
, another Roundabout is going to be built along the Railway
just above the Gas station and it is going to join with the first Roundabout that is
just over A2.Submitted by karigaruvimbo on
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