The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below illustrate the information about a
town
in the present day and what it will look like in the
future
and
also
, the changes that are going to be there in the
future
.
Overall
, in both maps, there is a
Town
centre
and a Gas station
as well as
, a
Railway
line. Currently, on the map, there is an Airfield on the
North Western
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side of the plan.
Moreover
,there is a
railway
line running from North to South.
Besides
, a Gas station is shown in the Western part of the
Town
centre
.Again, there is a road that connects
from
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the
Town
centre
to the Roundabout
that is
on the West of the
Town
centre
.
Whereas
in the
future
plan
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there will be an Industrial estate that will be converted from the Airfield
also
, there is going to be a road passing through the Industrial estate to the
Railway
.
Furthermore
, in the
future
, a road named A4 is going to be added and it is going to be
on
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the Southwest of the
Town
centre
also
, it is going to link with A2.
Additionally
, another Roundabout is going to be built along the
Railway
just above the Gas station and it is going to join with the first Roundabout
that is
just over A2.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, that is".
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, future, centre, railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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