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The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below illustrate the information about a
town
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 in the present day and what it will look like in the
future
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 and
also
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, the changes that are going to be there in the
future
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.
Overall
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, in both maps, there is a
Town
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centre
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 and a Gas station
as well as
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, a
Railway
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 line. Currently, on the map, there is an Airfield on the
North Western
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northwestern
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 side of the plan.
Moreover
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,there is a
railway
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 line running from North to South.
Besides
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, a Gas station is shown in the Western part of the
Town
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centre
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.Again, there is a road that connects
from
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the
Town
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centre
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 to the Roundabout
that is
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 on the West of the
Town
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centre
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.
Whereas
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 in the
future
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plan
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plan,
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 there will be an Industrial estate that will be converted from the Airfield
also
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, there is going to be a road passing through the Industrial estate to the
Railway
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.
Furthermore
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, in the
future
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, a road named A4 is going to be added and it is going to be
on
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in
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 the Southwest of the
Town
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centre
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also
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, it is going to link with A2.
Additionally
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, another Roundabout is going to be built along the
Railway
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 just above the Gas station and it is going to join with the first Roundabout
that is
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 just over A2.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, future, centre, railway with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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