«Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. Others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.»

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for a long time ago

sports

have big impact

for

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a country

esspecially

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especially

athletes

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compentetion

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competition

compensation

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it is debatable whether

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governments should

spend the money

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top

athletes

or for

sport

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facilities.

personally

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I stand with the second one and

this

essay will discuss both sides.

firstly

, top

athletes

are trained properly before

compete

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in international

competetion

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competitions

. top

athletes

whoose

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who

win the competitions bring numerous

impact

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for

country

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example medals, fame, reputation vice versa.

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the other hand most of the

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

elite sports facilities
national pride
international events
participation
high-quality
performance
national representation
fairness
social issues
population health
well-being
accessible
inclusive
community involvement
sponsorship
endorsements
recreational facilities
inspire
younger generations
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«Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. Others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.»

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely

In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while some think it is best to deal with them nationally Discuss both views and give your opinion

Museums are often thought to be boring, and many people perceive visiting them a waste of time. What do you think is the importance of museums, and how can they be made intersting?

It has been proposed that citizens should only consume food and drink products that have been produced in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?