The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph presents estimated the percentage of world
illiteracy
by gender in six different regions for the Use synonyms
last
year.
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Overall
, South Linking Words
Asia
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was
the most Verb problem
had
illiteracy
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area
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areas
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both Change preposition
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male
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males
female
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females
while
Developed Countries had the Linking Words
least
rates of Correct word choice
lowest
illiteracy
.
As we can see from the chart, South Use synonyms
Asia
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became
the largest Verb problem
has
illiteracy
both for Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
at about 34% and approximately Use synonyms
at
55%. Arab States Change preposition
apply
was
the second highest inability to read at more than 50% for Verb problem
had
men
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women
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Sub Saharan
Africa for Add a hyphen
Sub-Saharan
female
and Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
at just below 50% and just above 30%, respectively.
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males
On the other hand
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three
regions with the most literacy are Developed Countries, American/Caribbean, and East Correct article usage
the three
Asia
/Oceania. It is most likely for the citizens in Developed Countries Use synonyms
use
to read because the number of Verb problem
apply
illiteracy
was below 5% for both Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
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while
for the American/Caribbean was around 10%. Linking Words
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Asia
/Oceania had more than double Use synonyms
number
compared to Correct article usage
the number
men
at 20%.Use synonyms
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