The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
map elaborates the possible plan for the development of
factory
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a factory
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complex and housing area for workers. Based on the information, there are several changes starting from the buildings to the
infrastructures
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infrastructure
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. The thing that pops up the most is there will be no longer
factory
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a factory
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alongside the road to compare with
the
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apply
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future
refreshment
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refreshments
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. The factories will be demolished and the public residences will be constructed. More than that, the street plans to
prolonged
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until it reaches the farmland. In that case, a bridge will be available for
citizen
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citizens
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crossing the river.
On the other hand
, public
area
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areas
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will be going more versatile with numerous
facility
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facilities
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they can enjoy. It is obvious to see that there is an intent to make shops in the southwest of the river with a medical centre across
of
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it.
Additionally
, a playground aims to be established in the eastern of the area in proximity to the playground where it will be formed
at the end
of the road.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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