The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the comparison between Birshire in

present

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the present

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and the future projection. Generally, it will

has

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have

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significant changes and become more modern.

To begin

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with, nowadays, on the west of McGoldrick

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Road

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Road,

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there are farmer’s

market

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markets

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, some

houses

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, and shops.

Next,

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Hoolahan

Farm

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and

public

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a public

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park

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appear on the east. There is

also

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an open field next to

public

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a public

the public

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park

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Additionally

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, in the northeast of the area, there is Griffiths

Farm

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along the Corbie

Road

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However

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, in the future plans, The farmer’s market will be demolished and the Griffiths

Farm

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will be changed into a supermarket. Some

houses

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will be built to the south of McGoldrick

Road

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with an additional

road

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among

new

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the new

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houses

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Moreover

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, the shops will be replaced by

houses

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. A roundabout will appear

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the crossroad between That Street and McGoldrick

Road

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. The Hoolahan

Farm

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will disappear and the area will be used for a car

park

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In addition

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, a

sport

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sports

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center

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centre

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will be constructed in the open field and the public

park

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will still remain.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, houses, farm, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

171 words

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The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

some people think that history has little or nothing to offer us, while others bekive that history help us undertand present. discuss both views and give ypur oppinion

Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people thick that the government should be responsible for improving public health. Others, however, believe that everyone should take part in this issue.

Students should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement?