The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the comparison between Birshire in
present
and the future projection. Generally, it will Correct article usage
the present
has
significant changes and become more modern.
Wrong verb form
have
To begin
with, nowadays, on the west of McGoldrick Road
there are farmer’s Add a comma
Road,
market
, some Fix the agreement mistake
markets
houses
, and shops. Next,
Hoolahan Farm
and public
Correct article usage
a public
park
appear on the east. There is also
an open field next to public
Add an article
a public
the public
park
. Additionally
, in the northeast of the area, there is Griffiths Farm
along the Corbie Road
.
However
, in the future plans, The farmer’s market will be demolished and the Griffiths Farm
will be changed into a supermarket. Some houses
will be built to the south of McGoldrick Road
with an additional road
among new
Correct article usage
the new
houses
. Moreover
, the shops will be replaced by houses
. A roundabout will appear in
the crossroad between That Street and McGoldrick Change preposition
at
Road
. The Hoolahan Farm
will disappear and the area will be used for a car park
. In addition
, a sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
will be constructed in the open field and the public Change the spelling
centre
park
will still remain.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, houses, farm, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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