Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages
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media
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task achievement
Make sure to provide a nuanced argument in your essay, discussing both advantages and disadvantages of social media while ensuring your stance is clear throughout the essay. While your essay favors the advantages, it is important to also expound upon the disadvantages to maintain a balanced discussion.
coherence cohesion
Organize your essay with clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas together and maintain the flow within and between paragraphs. Start with a strong introduction and conclude with a summary that reaffirms your position.
Fully explain your ideas
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.