There is
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that says "The main purpose of
is to turn children into good
and workers
of benefitting them individually". I mostly agree
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statement. A
not only an academic lesson but
a social lesson to correct
' conduct.
almost all
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have similar lessons, so
will grow up to be
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good adults. But maybe there are some places that are not similar to others.
First of all, In every
, they teach general academic subjects
as
, Science, English
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etc.
to these subjects, there are lessons
to make the
become responsible
of the society.
, social studies or law studies
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teach
what they should and should not do. And that they will
punishment if they do something wrong.
, when
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their time in
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, they will learn how to behave and interact with each other.
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is
the way to guide children to the good path.
,
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every
have the same
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for the graduated
. Their curriculums tend to be the same. And that has a negative effect on the student. Because everyone has his own talent. Teaching
the same thing doesn't mean that
will get equal
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. To illustrate, when someone who's good at drawing and someone who's good at
study Algebra together, he who excels at
will do better. But, does
mean that
who get bad grades are bad
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? No, they may be bad at
but they have something they
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at too. Unfortunately
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their capabilities have to be measured with
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only
sameCorrect article usage
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standard.
, some
may not be like the others. There are a few
whose intent
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not just to bring up their student to be good people but
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them to be the best version of themself. These
still have the same
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for their
to meet. but they support things that are not in the requirement too. To give examples, some
permit
to join clubs of their interests after studying periods,
as
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art club, music club and sports club.
, these
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may not
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to just science
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and social studies
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. They have
other Change the wording
another course
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like literature, management and art
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too.
To sum it up, every
have similar ways of teaching and preparing their
to become good
and workers of the societies. Yet, they teach the same things to every
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, despite the fact that everyone is unique and has his own way of learning.
, you could say that
way of teaching doesn't benefit their
individually. That's why
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agree with
statement.
, there might be some
that do it differently.
keeping the standards like other
, they support their
individually too.
For theirChange preposition
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will grow up not only to be good
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but
to be themself that they dream of.