The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The given graph depicts information about the amounts of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002. It is divided into four different modes of transport and the quantities are given in
Million
tonnes
.
Overall
, the amount of products transported in all the modes was increased except
rail
. In 1974, just below 80
million
tonnes
of products were transported by Road and it was nearly two times higher than the goods taken by water or
rail
which was at 40
million
tonnes
. The least popular method in 1974 was
trasporting
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transporting
through the pipeline and only about 5
million
tonnes
were taken. Over the years these
numbers
were changed and the road
trasportation
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transportation
continued
it's
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popularity by increasing
numbers
from around 70 to just below 100.
Although
the quantities taken from water and
rail
were similar until 1978, amounts taken from water surpassed the
numbers
for
rail
and increased to just above 60
million
tonnes
.
However
, the
numbers
for railway transportation settled back
in
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40
million
tonnes
in 2002 after witnessing minor fluctuations. Pipeline
trasnportation
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transportation
was
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remained
as
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the least popular mode throughout the years, having transported an average of 20
million
tonnes
between 1982 to 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes, rail, numbers with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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