The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show information about the
british
school spending every year from 1981, 1991 and 2001. Change the capitalization
British
Overall
, it is noticeable that teachers' salaries is
Change the verb form
are
top
accounts Correct article usage
the top
to
Change preposition
for
largest
expenditure.
Mostly school spending refers to Correct article usage
the largest
teachers
salaries in 1981 which Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
followed
by a sudden increase Add a missing verb
was followed
percentage
Change preposition
in percentage
into
50% in 1991. Resources e.g books and furniture & equipment have Change preposition
to
similar
proportion namely 15%. Correct article usage
a similar
However
in 1991, resources requirements rose Add a comma
However,
into
20% Change preposition
by
whereas
furniture and equipment decreased by 10%.
Additionally
, Other outworker's salaries decline from 28% into 22%. Lastly
, the
insurance stood Correct article usage
apply
only
2% which becomes Change preposition
at only
aspect
Correct article usage
the aspect
requires
the least expenditure in school need. The insurance did not have Correct pronoun usage
that requires
a significant changes
, which is proven by the fact there is onlyCorrect the article-noun agreement
significant changes
a significant change
1
% increase from 1981 to 1991.Correct article usage
a 1
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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