The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
These maps
illustrates
an industrial area in the city of Norbiton and Change the verb form
illustrate
planned
future development of the site.
Correct article usage
the planned
According to
the maps, the changes will be dramatic, it will become more residential, moreover
, there will be playground
, shops, etcetera.
As it evident from the maps, there are will be new roads in Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
north-west
, north till the opposite Add an article
the north-west
side
of river
ban, Correct article usage
the river
in addition
, little
circled road will be added in the south Add an article
the little
side
of the area. Furthermore
, all factories will be knocked down and instead
of
Change preposition
apply
Correct pronoun usage
apply
it
there will be a school, shops, houses, Add a comma
it,
playground
and a medical centre. On the bank where Correct article usage
a playground
is
only farmland is located now, Unnecessary verb
apply
will
be Correct pronoun usage
there will
a
residential housing and other land will Correct article usage
apply
be remain
as farmland. Meanwhile, Change the verb form
remain
on
the Change preposition
apply
side
where manufactories are installed, will be completely changed. On the western side
two houses will be constructed. Add a comma
side,
In contrast
, 3 housings will be built on the east. Whereas
, on the north side
you will be able to see the last
house.
As for a
school, it will be on the end of the eastern road, Correct article usage
the
while
the playground will be opened up between 2 houses, a bit western the school. Turning to the shops, they are
will be on the Unnecessary verb
apply
south-west
Correct your spelling
southwest
side
and medical
centre will be located on Correct article usage
the medical
shops’
right Correct article usage
the shops’
side
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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