The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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These maps
illustrates
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an industrial area in the city of Norbiton and
planned
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the planned
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future development of the site.
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the maps, the changes will be dramatic, it will become more residential,
moreover
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, there will be
playground
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, shops, etcetera. As it evident from the maps, there are will be new roads in
north-west
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the north-west
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, north till the opposite
side
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of
river
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the river
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ban,
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,
little
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circled road will be added in the south
side
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of the area.
Furthermore
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, all factories will be knocked down and
instead
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of
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it
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there will be a school, shops, houses,
playground
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a playground
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and a medical centre. On the bank where
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only farmland is located now,
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be
a
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residential housing and other land will
be remain
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as farmland. Meanwhile,
on
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the
side
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where manufactories are installed, will be completely changed. On the western
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side
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two houses will be constructed.
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, 3 housings will be built on the east.
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, on the north
side
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you will be able to see the
last
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house. As for
a
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school, it will be on the end of the eastern road,
while
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the playground will be opened up between 2 houses, a bit western the school. Turning to the shops, they
are
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will be on the
south-west
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southwest
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side
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and
medical
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the medical
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centre will be located on
shops’
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the shops’
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right
side
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
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