Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend . In your email - recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn - explain how your friend could learn this sport - suggest that you both learn this sport together.

Dear Amanda, I received your email
last
night , so I'm writing
this
letter in your
respons
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response
.
At
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first
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I should tell you that I know a modern and
spaciues
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spacious
sport
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sports
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stadium which is located near your accommodation ;
therefore
, I know you have
strong
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phisycall
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physical
body shape , I recommend you to learn
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popular worldwide
olympic
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sport which is " Tennis" . As I searched , the tennis club has some international trainers who can speak English, so you won't have
spoken
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difficulties and problems. I'm
definetly
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definitely
sure that they will teach you all the technics which will be needed in a short time.
Finally
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I have another suggestion for you, should you
deciced
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decided
decide
to learn
this
sport , I will join you .We can register together as soon as possible and have a fantastic
leisuer
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leisurely
time beside each other. Your friend, Maryam
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Task Response
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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