The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data presented in the bar charts pertains to the post-graduation outcomes of British university
students
in 2008, excluding those entering full-time employment.
Overall
, a majority of
students
indicated a preference for furthering their education at an advanced level,
while
a minority opted to engage in volunteer work.
To begin
with, close to 30,000 individuals were selected for
further
scrutiny after specifying their highest aspiration.
Subsequently
, part-time employment emerged as the second most common choice, with roughly 17,000 selecting
this
option, followed by around 16,000 choosing unemployment as their preferred outcome. The least preferred option among
students
was voluntary work, chosen by 3,500.
In contrast
, more than 2,500 postgraduates pursued additional education and engaged in part-time employment, with each figure of 2,535 and 2,724, respectively.
Then
, over 1,500 pupils were neither employed nor enrolled in
further
studies.
Conversely
, a small fraction of
students
, specifically fewer than 500, decided to volunteer.
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