Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

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both recreational and educational

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famous among many citizens.

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, some parts

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the community

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statement

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many say that

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issue will only harm the

animals

and the disadvantage

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the benefit itself.

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both views as well from my own perspective

further

in the paragraphs below.

To begin

with, many

animals

are indeed treated like

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prisonee

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captivited

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captivated

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mostly

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made from

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metal.

For instance

, many of the fauna are not being cared by the

zookepers

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zookeepers

like they

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. They have been treated so badly at the point most of the

animals

gets

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bruises in their body and

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from malnourishment because of

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hunger and abandonment

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.

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phenomenon is contradictory with the purpose of the

zoo

itself where it is claimed that

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should be a learning place about flora and fauna. It is obvious that many

zoo

companies only want customer's money and it is

also

deserved to get

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by many individuals and animal lovers regarding

this

menace.

On the other hand

, the

zoo

is the only accessible and the most common

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practical learning place in

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society.

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is because

majority

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of the

zoo

has its own conservative area where it is almost the exact same

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the

animals

' origin place.

Furthermore

, the visitors can gain knowledge from there by observing the

animals

deeply

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one by one

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one-by-one

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. To illustrate, many

of

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the

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zoo

has a breeding area where they try to save specific rare animal

population

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populations

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.

This

action is not only educational

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but

also

beneficial for

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mother nature.

To sum up

, a

zoo

can be seen as a double-edged sword where there will always be

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good

in

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a bad.

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is because the biocracy of the

zoo

makes

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bad

in

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the

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global perspective. More than that, I personally think the

zoo

can be a good sector if they upgrade and make a better system.