Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about it?

Diversity in

food

sources has prevailed among the supermarkets and

this

variety

also

has expressed some concerns.

This

writer argues that the advantages of economic motives and enhancing citizens' lives outweigh the drawbacks of demolishing traditional markets. The most advantageous factor of importing

foods

from other countries is that it creates a competitive

market

that demands efficiency and productivity. In

further

detail, local distributors will be faced with many opponents from other sides when supermarkets are allowed to sell a variety of

foods

. The foreign distributors will try to improve their

food

quality

and cut down the prices to compete against those local distributors, resulting in local sellers being forced to do the same things as foreign ones.

As a result

, the local areas will get better

quality

food

and

this

also

leads to the enhancement in

foods

of the whole

country

. Breaking the monopoly of local markets must

also

be considered. It can be acknowledged that a monopoly

market

is harmful to the

country

's economy and citizens' lives. The absence of other opponents and producers will decline the motives to satisfy the local residents.

This

is because the local markets do not have to enhance their services because they are the only ones who can sell

food

to the residents. From prior knowledge,

Indian

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had

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faced with a poor

quality

of life in the 20th century when the local sellers had

the

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monopoly in selling

foods

.

However

, their standard of living

have

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improved significantly since the government created a competitive

market

in the

country

. Despite those benefits, some people criticize that imported

foods

will dominate the traditional ones. Because of the gap between

quality

and price, imported

foods

will take all the shares in the

market

and leave no niches for traditional products.

This

may be true, but actual situations around the world have

showed

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that the local products are unlikely to be totally replaced because they always find a way to thrive in the economy. Taking all points into account, the possible drawback of demolishing the traditional products is exceeded by the advances of enhancing the

country

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economy and citizens' lives.

Hence

, it has been demonstrated that a competitive

market

includes

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many sources of

food

is more beneficial than harmful.