The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The depicted figures delineate the electrical devices
ownership
Use synonyms
alter
as well as
Linking Words
the proportion of weekly time households dedicated to doing housework tasks in a certain nation from 1930 to 2019.
Overall
Linking Words
, the most striking part would be from 1920 to 2019, the percentage of households that own three distinct categories of electrical devices soared,
In contrast
Linking Words
, the ratio of hours housewives allocated to numerous tasks
such
Linking Words
as washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning plummeted sharply from exactly 50 hours to 10 hours respectively. As can be seen, from 1920 to 1960, the amount of refrigerator
ownership
Use synonyms
reached a peak of 100%,
however
Linking Words
,
thereafter
Linking Words
the amount remained constant.
additionally
Linking Words
, from 1920 to 2000 vacuum cleaner
ownership
Use synonyms
followed an upward pattern from 30% to 100%, from 2000 onward the pattern reached a plateau unlike the ratio of washing machine
ownership
Use synonyms
which first rose gradually from 40% in 1920 to 60% in 1960, there was
then
Linking Words
a plunge to approximately 65% in 1980, it
then
Linking Words
increased to roughly 75% in 2019.
Last
Linking Words
but not least, individuals' tendency to spend time doing housework activities was five times greater in 1920 compared to 2019.
Submitted by maryam.niknamm on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
What to do next:
Look at other essays: