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The charts show information about children learning musical instruments in 1996 and 2016 in the UK.

The charts show information about children learning musical instruments in 1996 and 2016 in the UK.
#show #information #children #instruments #uk
The presented pie chart and bar chart delineate the percentage of kids studying musical instruments and what
is
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 their choices between 1996 and 2016 in The United Kingdom. In general, it was conspicuous that children’s preferences were different from 1996 to 2016. They were more interested in learning musical
instrument
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instruments
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in
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 the end of periods than in the beginning.
In addition
,
piano
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the piano
a piano
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 was the most popular musical
instrument
 in both years. Turning to
the
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participation
of
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in
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 studying
musical
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a musical
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instrument
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instruments
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, in 1996 more than
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half
children
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of children
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 did not learn it;
however
, it decreased 10 years later and generated 24% of
kids’
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the kids’
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 population.
In contrast
, in 2016 musical
instrument
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instruments
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 was not a favorite material,
by
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contributing 44%,
then
 it skyrocketed to a third in 2015. As regards the choice,
piano
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the piano
a piano
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 was the most
favorable
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favourable
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 tool which
student
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students
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encouraged
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were encouraged
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 to study by generating more than 25 in the time frame. In the second highest selection, there was
keyboard
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a keyboard
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 which 30 individuals
eaggered
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agreed
 to enhance.
Furthermore
, violin and electric guitar have relatively
a
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the
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 same number of
sholars
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scholars
 about 10-16 individuals.
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