The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Unitedv Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Unitedv Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the medium carbon dioxide release of individuals in four distinct regions (The UK,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal) in 40 year period of time from 1967 and 2007. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the United Kingdom and
Sweden
decreased in the given data except for a moderate jump,
on the other hand
, Italy
as well as
Portugal grew considerably until the final figure. In 1967, Portugal began at approximately 1 metric
tonnes
, peaked at about 5 metric
tonnes
and overlapped Italy in the
last
year.
Likewise
, Italy started in the beginning with slightly above 4 metric
tonnes
which
then
its overtaken for
Sweden
in 1987 and finished the figure with lower than 8 metric
tonnes
.
According to
the data,
Sweden
comprised slightly over 8 metric tons in the first year and
this
grew moderately by 2 except for a huge decline to almost 5 metric tons in the end. As for England, initiated from barely 11 metric
tonnes
in 1967, showed a slow drop until 2007 in general.
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