The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Unitedv Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Unitedv Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the medium carbon dioxide release of individuals in four distinct regions (The UK,
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, Italy, and Portugal) in 40 year period of time from 1967 and 2007. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the United Kingdom and
Sweden
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decreased in the given data except for a moderate jump,
on the other hand
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, Italy
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Portugal grew considerably until the final figure. In 1967, Portugal began at approximately 1 metric
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, peaked at about 5 metric
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and overlapped Italy in the
last
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year.
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, Italy started in the beginning with slightly above 4 metric
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which
then
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its overtaken for
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in 1987 and finished the figure with lower than 8 metric
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.
According to
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the data,
Sweden
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comprised slightly over 8 metric tons in the first year and
this
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grew moderately by 2 except for a huge decline to almost 5 metric tons in the end. As for England, initiated from barely 11 metric
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in 1967, showed a slow drop until 2007 in general.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
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