The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps detail the changes that occurred to a
town
named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Looking from an
overall
viewpoint, the Willington
town
had transformed from an agricultural
area
region into a residential
area
, with the most significant changes being the construction of houses and the improvement of the
town
’s infrastructure.
Initially
, the
town
was utilized for farming with extended farmland and green spaces. There were two villages and a limited number of 100 homes in the
area
. In 1860, a bridge was erected and crossed the existing
river
.
Additionally
, a new road was built, leading from the
river
into the
town
. Some cultivating land
as well as
woods had been removed
while
a village and 100 more houses emerged. By 2000, farms and trees had been knocked down completely. New facilities had been set up in the bottom right corner of the
town
where the trees once were. There were two schools and three sports fields, with a new road going up to the residential
area
which had been expanded to 6 villages and 500 homes to accommodate more residents.
Finally
, some shops were installed along the
river
bank and a bird’s wetland was constructed
at the end
of the
river
.
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