The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The Central

Library

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has changed considerably in 20 years with the addition of many new technological facilities, machines, and a desk. These changes have happened at the expense of a large portion of tables and chairs.

Public

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The public

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library

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, 20 years ago, had large amounts of CDs , videos , and computer games in the left upper corner of the

library

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Additionally

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, from the left and right side of the entrance :

reading

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the reading

a reading

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room ( for newspapers and magazines) and

enquiry

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the enquiry

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desk ( for tickets and return of

books

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)

situated

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are situated

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accordingly

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Furthermore

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, the adult

books

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section was located

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apply

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apply

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on the middle side,

fiction

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and non-

fiction

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, separated by tables and chairs. The area has undergone significant changes and looks completely unique today. Much of the adult

fiction

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books

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section has been decreased, and replaced by children's

fiction

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books

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. A new café and computer room are now added, and sofas, information desk ,

self-service

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and self-service

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machines are

also

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added. The Children 's

books

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part has been changed into a lecture room; children's

fiction

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books

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have

attached

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been attached

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upper-left

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the upper-left

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side of the

library

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, fiction with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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