the map below is of the town Galsdon. A new supermarket (s) is planned for the town. the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. write at least 150 words.

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This

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map depicts two possible locations, which can be used for building a new supermarket in Garlsdon City.

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, it can be seen that the size of the industrial

area

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is bigger than the residential

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what is shown, the S1 region is located in the upper northern-east side of the town, which is about 12 km from Hindon, where 10000 individuals live there.

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, it is nearer to the top housing

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than S2.

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, it is situated between the railway and the main road, it is closer to the manufacturing region. Regarding the S2 location, it lies in the centre of the town, which represents 65000 population, and it is closer to the railway.

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it is in the middle of the industrial

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, it is 25 km to Carnsdon, which contains 29000 population, and it is 16 km to Bransdon 15000 population.

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we could say that, the S2 location has more advantages in comparison to the S1, as it serves many people.

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