the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. summarize the information and make comparison. write 150 words.
These maps depict the developments that will be constructed in the Norbiton manufacturing region.
Overall
, it can be seen that all factories are redeveloped into new buildings for different purposes.
According to
what is shown, in the old map, a river is located along the northern side of the town, a farmland is adjacent to the outer side of the river. But, in the centre of the city, eight factories are situated, which are close to each other, so this
region is called industrial
Add an article
an industrial
the industrial
area
.
Regarding to
the new plan, which will be implemented later, a part of the farmland will be turned into a housing Remove the preposition
apply
area
, and a bridge will be established over the river to make a way to the middle of the town. In addition
, all factories will be demolished, so six residential area
will be built inside the city. Change to a plural noun
areas
Also
, other buildings will be set up to introduce various services to the population such
as school
, malls, and hospitals.
Fix the agreement mistake
schools
To sum up
, we could say that the industrial area
will be destructed completely in order to covert
it to a housing region.Correct your spelling
convert
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