The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the responses to a questionnaire
of
Change preposition
about
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how much
coffee
and tea they purchased and drank who have been living in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart in the
last
4 weeks.
Overall
, the biggest amount of instant
coffee
was bought, and the highest number of people went to cafes in Hobart,
although
the biggest purchase to get fresh
coffee
was made in Sydney. Residents who live in Hobart, Melbourne, and Sydney had the biggest distribution in terms of going to a cafe to drink
coffee
and tea with more than %60, even though, the
least
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lowest
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percentage was roughly less than one to two of the people
live
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living
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in Adelaide.
On the other hand
, fresh
coffee
was sold about %35 in both Brisbane and Adelaide,
however
, the people who preferred to buy instant
coffee
outnumbered fresh ones in both cities with percentages of about 55% and 49%, respectively in the
last
4 weeks.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • survey
  • habit
  • fresh coffee
  • instant coffee
  • purchases
  • trends
  • compare
  • analyze
  • evaluate
  • preferences
  • feature
  • relevant
  • highlight
  • potential reasons
  • explanation
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