The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates information about the process of coffee manufacturing and made ready for the purpose of selling in different stores.
Overall
, the process consists of more than ten stages, beginning with picking beans and ending up with packing them into bottles. First of all, the coffee beans are collected with bare hands and dried
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using tools on a sunny day. After that, they are kept in a large bowl where they are roasted.
Next,
they are left to cool down immediately and grind them using a grinder.
Then
, they are mixed with hot water and strained the mixture. In the next stage, the mixture is frozen inside a jar and again using a grinder the frozen liquid is ground.
Following
this
, they are dried using a vacuum, where the water goes out from above and made sure they vanish away totally.
Finally
, the products are packed into a variety of jars and are made ready for use.
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