Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about it?

Some individuals

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the importance

to keep

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of keeping

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both your home and workplace tidy and organized. I strongly agree with

this

idea because it enhances efficiency and

provide

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comfortable feelings

while

at that place. A good reason to maintain the order when we put our things is that it

increase

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our efficiency as it will be easier for us to find the location of our things whenever needed.

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, it will

reduces

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stress since we can focus doing our activities (Job or chores).

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, maintaining order reflects positively

in

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on

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our ethics namely, discipline and responsibility.

Moreover

, having a tidy and organized

places

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place

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can give you

sense

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a sense

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of comfort. It is beneficial for our mental health. In

workplace

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the workplace

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the comfort can

rose

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the

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creativity and productivity.

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, an artist can explore more of their creativity when they

given

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a clean studio where all the materials are organized and clean. As a way of conclusion, I once again reform that the role of

organization

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the organization

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in

worplace

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workplace

workplaces

and home is really important. As it will increase

the

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productivity and will

makes

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you more comfortable staying there.