The charts provide information about people’s travel in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts provide information about people’s travel in one country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
figure shows the number of
people
travelling in a country from 1995 to 2015 which is divided into their
travel
distance, time consumed, and
transportation
options they used during the
travel
.
Overall
, the furthest and the longest trip was done in 2005,
however
, the lowest
as well as
the shortest trip was taken in 2015.
Furthermore
, Other private
transport
is the popular
transportation
option compared to other
transportation
, namely publicly used vehicles. In 1995, most of the travellers spent roughly 372
Hours
to
travel
to a country with 7000
miles
distances.
Moreover
, there was a moderate climb in the year 2000, when
people
started to
travel
further
to a country of about 7150
miles
away and travelling time rose by 10
hours
. A few years later, in 2005 there was a plateau in the distance travelled,
otherwise
, an enormous boom in travelling time, it increased to approximately 390
hours
. 5 years from 2005, there was a significant deep in
travel
distances as
people
only travelled around 6700
miles
and only spent 370
hours
travelling.
In addition
, a minimal fall hit in 2015 as the traveller spent approximately 365
hours
and 6600
miles
in distance. The most used mode of
transportation
throughout the year was private
transportation
aside from cycling. Starting in 1995, 62% of the population preferred to use private
transportation
as their option to
travel
, following private
transport
, 28% out of 100% population chose between walking and cycling,
whereas
, the rest 9% preferred public
transportation
as their option. Starting from the year 2000 – 2010 there was a gradual decline in the mode of
transportation
for walking or cycling,
moreover
, it was followed by a steep rise in travellers who used other private
transport
and public
transport
. As of 2015, there was a plateau, in which
people
tended to consume the same mode of
transportation
as in 2010.
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