The chart below shows the proporsional of Energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003

The chart below shows the proporsional of Energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003
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Proportion of
energy
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produced from different resources in 1985 and 2003 is ilustrated in charts above. There are two charts, the top one describes
energy
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produced in 1985 and the bottom describes the year of 2003. There are 5 resources written on
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data. Mentioned from the largest to smallest precentage of usage in 2003 are as follows: oil, natural
gas
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, coal, nuclear, hydro and other renewable
energy
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. Meanwhile in 1985, the sequence is: oil, nuclear, natural
gas
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, coal, and other renewable
energy
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. There are increasing proportion of both natural
gas
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and coal. Natural
gas
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usage went up from 13% to 23%.
Energy
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produced from coal boost up to 22% in 2003 from 8% in 1985. The usage of other renewable
energy
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is
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rising found from 1% to 4%.
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, there is a decline in oil using in 2003 to 39% from 52%. The same reduction is
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found in nuclear
energy
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, from 22% to 8%.
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