The table and bar graph below showstime spent in leisure and householdactivities in the UK. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisonswhere relevant.

The table and bar graph below showstime spent in leisure and householdactivities in the UK.

Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisonswhere relevant.
The sheet and graph give information on the movement recorded in the free day between
Men
and
Women
, and household
moment
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moments
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. It is clearly seen that TV, video, and radio are major
activities
in the comfort time between
Women
and
Men
in sharp contrast to Reading and Sport,
moreover
,
Women
recorded the highest rate of cooking and Washing in household
activities
as compared with
Men
. In detail, TV, video, and radio recorded the highest rate of action in free time between
Men
and
Women
with 137 and 118 as opposed to reading and sports had a lower
number
of leisure
activities
in both genders.
On the other hand
, cooking and washing included the high level of
number
of
Women
in family
activities
around 77, as much as shopping, and clothes washing recorded to about 46 and 30.
Furthermore
, the activity of repair in
Women
recorded around 14, which is the only activity in the home
that is
lower than in
Men
.
Last
, the activity of cooking and washing includes the
number
of
Men
to almost 30,
while
shopping and repair occupy the
number
around 14 and 19. Twenty-two of
Men
who spending time
for
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clothes washing and ironing in household
activities
.
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