The line graph shows the number of books borrowed from four libraries in the mouths of June, July, August and September of

The line graph shows the number of books borrowed from four libraries in the mouths of June, July, August and September of
The given line charts show the
numbers
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number
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of books borrowed from four libraries
in
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from
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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June up to September. The four
reading-places
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reading places
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describe
Wrong verb form
described
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above are West Eaton,
Ryeslip
, Sutton Wood and Church Mount, each of them
are
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is
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illustrated with distinct colours i.e. Blue, Red, Green, and Purple respectively. Generally,
Ryeslip
had the greatest number of borrowed books, except for July in which Sutton Wood was leading.
On the other hand
, Church Mount is consistently the place with the least amount of rented books,
although
in June, both
this
and West Eaton showed as little. Considering the progress of monthly numbers,
Ryeslip
, despite being the top library, seems to receive a downslope interest. Meanwhile,
on the contrary
, both West Eaton and Church
month
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Month
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has
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have
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an
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apply
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increasing popularity,
although
never
reach
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reached
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the extent of
Ryeslip
. Sutton Wood,
however
, fluctuates drastically, with a decline from July to Augst, but
rise
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rises
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back up and being the highest score in September.
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