The line graph shows the number of books borrowed from four libraries in the mouths of June, July, August and September of
The given line charts show the
numbers
of books borrowed from four libraries Fix the agreement mistake
number
in
Change preposition
from
the
June up to September. The four Correct article usage
apply
reading-places
Correct your spelling
reading places
describe
above are West Eaton, Wrong verb form
described
Ryeslip
, Sutton Wood and Church Mount, each of them are
illustrated with distinct colours i.e. Blue, Red, Green, and Purple respectively.
Generally, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Ryeslip
had the greatest number of borrowed books, except for July in which Sutton Wood was leading. On the other hand
, Church Mount is consistently the place with the least amount of rented books, although
in June, both this
and West Eaton showed as little.
Considering the progress of monthly numbers, Ryeslip
, despite being the top library, seems to receive a downslope interest. Meanwhile, on the contrary
, both West Eaton and Church month
Capitalize word
Month
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
an
increasing popularity, Correct article usage
apply
although
never reach
the extent of Wrong verb form
reached
Ryeslip
. Sutton Wood, however
, fluctuates drastically, with a decline from July to Augst, but rise
back up and being the highest score in September.Correct subject-verb agreement
rises
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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