The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The price illustrates a detailed breakdown of
class
sizes in primary
schools
across 4
states
of Australia in the year 2010.
Overall
, it could be seen that
while
the level of 21 to 25
students
contributed the highest in 3 out of 4
states
, except for South Australia, the opposite was true in the
class
size
of 30
students
or more.
To begin
with, New South Wales’s primary
schools
shared a common tendency of
class
size
from 21 to 25
students
, which experienced 37% in 2010 and the second position was a
class
including 20
students
or fewer with 26%. A similar trend could be seen in 4
class
sizes of Western Australia’s primary
schools
.
For example
, the distribution of
classes
from 30
students
or more witnessed 5% in Western Australia compared to 4% in New South Wales. Looking at the rest, primary
schools
in the Australian Capital Territory attributed the highest percentage of
classes
with 21 to 25
students
, 51%.
Besides
, the level of
classes
with under 20
students
also
contributed the most dominant portion in 4
states
, 38%.
However
, the
class
size
of more than 30
students
shared the lowest proportion, 1%. In South America, the significant difference was that the percentage of
classes
with 21 to 25
students
was not the most common
class
size
as in 4
states
,
while
it belonged to
classes
with 20
students
or fewer, 33% compared to 36%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words class, schools, states, students, size, classes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary school
  • class size
  • proportion
  • average
  • trends
  • small/medium/large classes
  • implications
  • quality of education
  • teacher workload
  • comparison
  • variance
  • state-by-state analysis
  • education policy
  • statistical representation
  • pie chart interpretation
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