Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
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a human
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been tested
about
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Therefore
, experiments
testing on animals
acceptable, but scientists should follow up the correct process while
engaging.
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human friendly
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human-friendly
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computer programming and genetic cells for further
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humans
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laws
animals
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task achievement
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and your position on it. Your introduction should engage with both perspectives presented in the prompt before stating your thesis.
task achievement
Give equal time to discussing both the justifications of animal testing and the possible alternatives. Don't focus excessively on one side of the argument without adequately addressing the other.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear and logical flow throughout your essay. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea and follow logically from the one before it, with clear topic sentences and transitions.
task achievement
Make sure to support your main points with relevant examples or evidence. Examples should be specific and directly illustrate the point you're making.
coherence cohesion
Avoid grammatical errors and spelling mistakes which can disrupt the reader's understanding and detract from the overall coherence of the essay.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices appropriately to link ideas together, but be careful with their usage to avoid sounding mechanical or forced.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the conclusion summarizes the main points made in the essay and reflects back on the thesis, without introducing new information.
Your opinion
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