the graph show a map of islip town. describe it

The presented map above shows the comparison between Islip

town

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centre before

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and the newly planned development.The common elements of the

town

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are shops,

park

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parks

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, housing, and

school

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schools

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. Some of the changes that will be built are the new housing places, the

pedestrian only

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road, the bus station, and the car park. Two of the new housing places will be constructed inside the

town

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centre, and the other housing will be built on the other way of the dual carriageway road. The most

dramatical

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change that will be constructed is the dual carriageway that goes around the

town

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centre. In the coming years, the only place that will stay the same is the school. It will be having the same size and the position will

also

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remain unchanged.

helma.devina

Jan 14, 2024

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Varied vocabulary

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128 words

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