the graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line chart details four various transportation ways in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the
Correct article usage
apply
road
transportation had the most used
and the pipeline Replace the word
use
hold
the least usage in the given period.
Wrong verb form
held
To begin
with, the road
and the water have had the same pattern that as can be seen both of them have increased over the years. The road
started at almost 72 million
tonnes
in 1974 and continued to 2002 with a rising trend and ended under
100 Change preposition
at under
million
tonnes
. As can be observed the water and the road
started at the
similar Correct article usage
a
point
, at almost 40 million
tonnes
in 1974, and were steady till 1978 then
their route separated. The water went increasingly until the last
period, at 62, whereas
the rail decreased continusely
to 1994 and after that Correct your spelling
continuously
has grown
Wrong verb form
grew
in
its starting Change preposition
at
point
, at 40.
The pipeline had the lowest point
at beginning
Add an article
the beginning
a beginning
point
at 5 million
tonnes
and grow
over the period steadily and ended at 21 Wrong verb form
grew
million
tonnes
in 2002.Submitted by s_karimi2002 on
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