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Many people believe that university students should study a full of range of suject, instead of some spesific subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give reason for your answer and include any relevan example from own knowledge or experience.

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Many people think that rather than focusing on a few core subjects, university
students
 should study a wide variety of subjects. In my opinion,
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 disagree with
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 statement because it helps them focus and prepare future
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. The biggest reason why
students
 need to learn specific
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 is efficiency and focus. Specialized programs may enable
students
 to complete their education more efficiently, focusing on the skills and knowledge directly relevant to their future careers.
This
 efficiency can be especially beneficial in fields with clear professional pathways. Another reason is meeting Industry Needs. Specializing in specific subjects allows
students
 to develop a deep expertise in their chosen field.
This
 in-depth knowledge can be essential for certain professions and research-oriented careers. specialization is necessary to meet the specific demands of certain industries. Professionals in science, technology, engineering, and medicine often require specialized knowledge and skills. In conclusion, university
students
 really need to learn
spesific
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specific
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 because it
allow
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 them to focus and be ready to take
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Task Achievement
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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