The diagram below show two methods of using water to produce electriciy
The two pictures demonstrate two ways of turning
water
into electricity.
Overall
, there are two differently complex methods to produce electricity by using liquid including a hydroelectric dam and wave-air generator.
With hydroelectric, first dams will be situated near the river and water
will be stored in the reservoir then
the gate opens to let water
in. The width and angle of the penstock speed aqua up and the force of the water
's flow will turn the turbine and spindle. After that, the spindle rotates in the generator to produce electric power and electricity distributed to power lines. For remaining water
, will be released into the river.
Related to wave air, different from the above method, it is located in the sea. The progress begins when waves enter the lower chamber and push air into the upper chamber. Air rises and turns the turbine and spindle to rotate in the generator to produce electric power. The remaining amount of gas is released from the upper chamber.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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