The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The pie charts displayed yearly
expenditure
by a certain school in the UK in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
, teachers’ salaries
were the highest area of expense throughout the years. Furthermore
, the proportion
of furniture and equipment overtook other workers' salaries
as the second-largest expenditure
in 2001.
Expenditure
on teacher salaries
remained highest for all three years, accounting for 40%, 50%, and 45% of total spending respectively. The school spent the second largest proportion
of its expenditure
on other workers' salaries
in both 1981 and 1991, and the figure continued to decline in 2001 by 15%. Although
furniture and equipment dropped from 15% to 5%, it went up sharply and replaced other workers’ salaries
in 2001 as the second largest expenditure
that year, at 23%.
Spending on resources started at 15% in 1981. After experiencing a small growth in 1991, the number decreased to 9% in 2001. Although
the proportion
of insurance increased over the years, the number accounted for the smallest proportion
of about 2%, 3%, and 8%, respectively.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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