The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The pie charts displayed yearly
expenditure
by a certain school in the UK in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
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Overall
, teachers’ Linking Words
salaries
were the highest area of expense throughout the years. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
proportion
of furniture and equipment overtook other workers' Use synonyms
salaries
as the second-largest Use synonyms
expenditure
in 2001.
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Expenditure
on teacher Use synonyms
salaries
remained highest for all three years, accounting for 40%, 50%, and 45% of total spending respectively. The school spent the second largest Use synonyms
proportion
of its Use synonyms
expenditure
on other workers' Use synonyms
salaries
in both 1981 and 1991, and the figure continued to decline in 2001 by 15%. Use synonyms
Although
furniture and equipment dropped from 15% to 5%, it went up sharply and replaced other workers’ Linking Words
salaries
in 2001 as the second largest Use synonyms
expenditure
that year, at 23%.
Spending on resources started at 15% in 1981. After experiencing a small growth in 1991, the number decreased to 9% in 2001. Use synonyms
Although
the Linking Words
proportion
of insurance increased over the years, the number accounted for the smallest Use synonyms
proportion
of about 2%, 3%, and 8%, respectively.Use synonyms
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