Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In some cultural and historical
attractions
in a country
, including my country
, foreign tourists
are charged a higher price than local tourists
. I strongly agree that the idea of charging more foreign tourists
than local visitors should be implemented in every cultural and historical attraction in a country
.
First and foremost, foreign tourists
must be charged more than local tourists
. I believe certain people agree with this
statement because of several reasons. One of the reasons is that some foreign tourists
have a higher value of their currency to a country
than the country
they are visiting. For instance
, Indonesia charged
more to American Wrong verb form
charges
tourists
because Indonesia’s currency is lower than America
. Because of that reason, I think it is fair enough with the idea of foreign Change noun form
America's
tourists
being charged a higher price than local visitors in cultural and historical attractions
.
Furthermore
, with
that reason, it is linked with the Change preposition
for
country
’s Gross Domestic Product (GDP
) which can be earned more through
giving foreign Change preposition
by
tourists
higher prices than local’s. For some countries, income from foreign tourists
is the biggest contributor for
their Change preposition
to
GDP
. This
reason is valid for some countries, for instance
, in Indonesia, tourism is the most reliable field for GDP
because there are so many historical attractions
in Indonesia. This
means that income from giving foreign tourists
higher prices contributes more to Indonesia’s GDP
.
In conclusion, I believe with the reasons for higher currency and contributing more to a country
’s GDP
, foreign tourists
must be charged a higher price than the local prices when they go to a country
’s cultural and historical attractions
.Submitted by amaliasekar30 on
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