You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company to witch supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what to want the shop or the company to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to show my disappointment with

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the

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equipment I bought from your store. To commence with, I bought

headphone

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a headphone

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set from your place on January 15, 2024. I have a warranty of 2 years.

While

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purchasing I tested the device and it was perfect sounding.

However

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from

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past

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the past

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couple of

days

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I am not able to listen to the audio of calls I am receiving from my clients. I am working as a customer service representative.My job is to

listen

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listen to

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the queries of customers but owing to

headphone

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a headphone

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issue I am not able to attend any call

therefore

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I took

break

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a break

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from work. It is

effecting

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affecting

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my salary and working hours. Eventually, I would like you to send me a new pair of listening headphones

hence

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, I have

warranty

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a warranty

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Moreover

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, be assured that those are properly tested by

qualified

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a qualified

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team. Looking forward to

receive

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a new electronic gadget soon. Yours Sincerely, Gagan Kaur

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Jan 15, 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure clear paragraphing with each paragraph presenting a central idea. Avoid abrupt transitions between ideas for enhanced coherence.

coherence cohesion

Use a more varied range of cohesive devices (linking words) to help the text flow better and to show clear relationships between ideas.

task achievement

Make sure to directly address all parts of the task with sufficient detail, ensuring that the purpose of the letter is clear and the request is explicit.

task achievement

Adopt a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. It should be formal and polite but can also reflect personal voice where suitable.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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malfunction
warranty
technical support
disruption
productivity
defective
turnaround time
customer satisfaction
troubleshooting
inconvenience
repair service
replacement unit
defect
urgency
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