The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Given bar graph depicts, five metros Mexico, Dubai, Paris,

Munich

and

Toronto

yearly income based on

language

-related jobs in US

dollars

Overall

, jobs for

interpreters

Toronto

and

Munich

are high

while

Mexico

stand

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stands

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in the

last

position.

On the other hand

, Dubai has the same opportunity for both

interpreters

and

language

teachers.

To begin

with, Mexico have the lowest

scopes

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scope

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for all three

interpreters

, translators and

language

teaching

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teachers

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all

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

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earning approximately 18000 US

dollars

secondly

, in

Dubai

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Dubai,

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people earn the same in two jobs 60000 per annum but translators earn less than 50000 annually. In Paris

individuals

Fix the agreement mistake

individual

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receive

Verb problem

apply

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Correct article usage

apply

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salary for

interpreters

and translators

are same

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65000 a year

whereas

language

teachers only receive 45000

dollars

. Where

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apply

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Munich

and

Toronto

show different trends mankind take home earnings for

interpreters

is much higher 75000

dollars

followed by 80000

dollars

. On the other side,

Toronto

people are paid the same as the other two, but in

Munich

translator's gross is 65000 followed by 60000

dollars

for

language

teachers.

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