The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given bar graph depicts, five metros Mexico, Dubai, Paris,
Munich
and
Toronto
yearly income based on
language
-related jobs in US
dollars
.
Overall
, jobs for
interpreters
in
Toronto
and
Munich
are high
while
Mexico
stand
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in the
last
position.
On the other hand
, Dubai has the same opportunity for both
interpreters
and
language
teachers.
To begin
with, Mexico have the lowest
scopes
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scope
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for all three
interpreters
, translators and
language
teaching
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teachers
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all
are
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earning approximately 18000 US
dollars
,
secondly
, in
Dubai
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Dubai,
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people earn the same in two jobs 60000 per annum but translators earn less than 50000 annually. In Paris
individuals
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individual
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receive
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a
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salary for
interpreters
and translators
are same
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is
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65000 a year
whereas
language
teachers only receive 45000
dollars
. Where
,
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Munich
and
Toronto
show different trends mankind take home earnings for
interpreters
is much higher 75000
dollars
followed by 80000
dollars
. On the other side,
Toronto
people are paid the same as the other two, but in
Munich
translator's gross is 65000 followed by 60000
dollars
for
language
teachers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words munich, toronto, dollars, interpreters, language with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • languages-related jobs
  • US dollars
  • five cities
  • highest income
  • lowest income
  • average income
  • significantly higher
  • second highest
  • one-fourth
  • gradual increase
  • variations
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