The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Given bar graph depicts, five metros Mexico, Dubai, Paris,

Munich

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and

Toronto

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yearly income based on

language

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-related jobs in US

dollars

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Overall

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, jobs for

interpreters

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Toronto

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and

Munich

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are high

while

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Mexico

stand

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in the

last

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position.

On the other hand

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, Dubai has the same opportunity for both

interpreters

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and

language

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teachers.

To begin

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with, Mexico have the lowest

scopes

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scope

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for all three

interpreters

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, translators and

language

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teaching

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teachers

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all

are

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apply

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earning approximately 18000 US

dollars

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secondly

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, in

Dubai

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Dubai,

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people earn the same in two jobs 60000 per annum but translators earn less than 50000 annually. In Paris

individuals

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individual

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receive

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apply

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Correct article usage

apply

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salary for

interpreters

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and translators

are same

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65000 a year

whereas

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language

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teachers only receive 45000

dollars

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. Where

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apply

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Munich

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and

Toronto

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show different trends mankind take home earnings for

interpreters

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is much higher 75000

dollars

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followed by 80000

dollars

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. On the other side,

Toronto

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people are paid the same as the other two, but in

Munich

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translator's gross is 65000 followed by 60000

dollars

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for

language

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teachers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words munich, toronto, dollars, interpreters, language with synonyms.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

annual income
languages-related jobs
US dollars
five cities
highest income
lowest income
average income
significantly higher
second highest
one-fourth
gradual increase
variations

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