A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercises and avoids stress. what should people do to stay healthy in your country? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, most
people
have started to realise the importance of mantaining
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maintaining
healt
. They should Correct your spelling
health
to has
healthy food, Wrong verb form
have
gets
plenty of Wrong verb form
get
exercises
and Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
avoids
stress. Correct subject-verb agreement
avoid
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essay will explain how a few people
gets
healthy and give some reasons Change the verb form
get
include
any relevant examples.
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including
Firstly
, at this
moment lots of people
have a
awareness Change the article
an
to have
a healthy body. Even though they should go to work Change preposition
of having
but
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apply
their
always have Correct pronoun usage
they
a
time for exercise. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, currently
as we know have many supplements or healthy foods sold in the market. Add a comma
currently,
That
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Those
things
make citizent
feel Correct your spelling
citizens
essier
to get Correct your spelling
easier
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a halthy
halthy
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healthy
life
. For example
, some people
prefer to doing
exercise before Wrong verb form
do
their
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they
gets
to work or after work. Correct subject-verb agreement
get
In addition
, have many places such
a
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as
gym
that can Fix the agreement mistake
gyms
their
visit or if they don't want to go Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
gym, they can Change preposition
to the
doing
something at home Wrong verb form
do
such
as meditation, yoga, or other simillar
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similar
things
.
On the other hand
, another reason why should people
do to stay healthy in my country is most of
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apply
the
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apply
people
prefer to see someone with a good bodies
. Correct the article-noun agreement
body
Have
a good body should Fix the infinitive
To have
to consuming
some healthy food. Wrong verb form
consume
For instance
, if some of
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apply
the
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apply
people
need to gets
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get
diet
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a diet
their
should Replace the word
there
to
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apply
consistant
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consistently
to
eat fruit, vegetables, or wheat. That Fix the infinitive
apply
food
necessary Add a verb
food is
food was
for
reduce fat in the body. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, in this
era
we quite often see Add a comma
era,
instan
healthy foods that include some Correct your spelling
instant
vitamin
or protein. Fix the agreement mistake
vitamins
That
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That thing
Those things
things
can get more
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apply
essier
to get healthy bodies for some Correct your spelling
easier
people
.
In conclusion, have
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having
healthy
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a healthy
life
and healthy bodies
can lead to positive Fix the agreement mistake
body
things
. That
is
will make you more confident to enjoy your Unnecessary verb
apply
life
. When we have a good life
definitely we have a low stress level.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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