The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

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diagram illustrates the life cycle of a

frog

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. The start of the cycle is signified by eggs that

then

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turn into embryos and the following steps

itirate

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initiate

the growth of the embryo into tadpoles. The aforementioned tadpoles grow external gills to aid them with breathing

while

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thier

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their

tail

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continues extending. Over a period of

time

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time,

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they

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grow legs and keep on growing using the food stored in their tails, soon front legs appear too. As the cycle keeps progressing the tail starts shortening and the

frog

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evolves into a young

frog

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which continues

it's

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its

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evoloution

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evolution

until it becomes an adult

frog

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routmanmayeeMon Jan 15 2024

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words frog with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

104 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Metamorphosis
Tadpole
Aquatic
Terrestrial
Hatch
Mature
Lungs
Eggs
Pond
Life Cycle
Lay eggs
Develop
Adapt
Tail shortening

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