The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the life cycle of a frog
. The start of the cycle is signified by eggs that then
turn into embryos and the following steps itirate
the growth of the embryo into tadpoles. The aforementioned tadpoles grow external gills to aid them with breathing Correct your spelling
initiate
while
thier
tail Correct your spelling
their
also
continues extending.
Over a period of time
they Add a comma
time,
also
grow legs and keep on growing using the food stored in their tails, soon front legs appear too. As the cycle keeps progressing the tail starts shortening and the frog
evolves into a young frog
which continues it's
Correct your spelling
its
evoloution
until it becomes an adult Correct your spelling
evolution
frog
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