The table illustrates the projected costings during the five years in American dollars for three environmental strategies for stable forestry, whilst the pie chart presents the anticipated expenses distributed by four sectors in the first year.
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The table gives information about the projected budget of 3 environmental
project
for sustainable foresty in American dollars for the next five years, Change to a plural noun
projects
while
the pie chart ilustrates
the projected expenditure in the first Correct your spelling
illustrates
year
.
In general, the total amount of money needed for the project of
each Change preposition
apply
year
always experiences fluctuation.
Looking in more details
, the cost for West Africa's sustainable foresty keeps decreasing from Fix the agreement mistake
detail
year
1 until year
4, before it goes up to 3,5 million in the last
year
. Central America's budget almost doubles the
Correct determiner usage
that
West
Africa in the beginning but Change preposition
of West
then
the number falls down until
5 Change preposition
to
millions
Change to singular
million
the
third Change preposition
in the
year
and remains the same for the rest of the period.
As for the South-East Asia's
project, it needs 30 Change noun form
Asia
millions
for the first Change to singular
million
year
and 50 millions
for the fifth Change to singular
million
year
.
As can be seen, the pie chart shows that half of the projected expenditure in the first year
is used for the
salaries.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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