The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian 

town.
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The presented flow chart delineates the stages and equipment involved in the operation of accumulating rainwater for the expedition of drinking
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in an Australian town.
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, the process has various steps, beginning with gathering rainwater into drains, followed by filtering and treating
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and ending with clear
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for every inhabitant. In the first step, the rainwater falls down from the roofs of each house into a system of filtering
water
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through drains that are attached to the side of each house. After that, the pure
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is flowed to a huge tank before being transferred to another storage. Once the prior step has finished, the treatment process is able to start. Pure
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is filtered with the assistance of chemicals, which makes the
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fresher and more safety and totally gets rid of metals and other elements. Eventually, the purified
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is pumped to every household in that area for daily consumption
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rainwater harvesting
  • rooftops
  • drains and gutters
  • underground storage tanks
  • water treatment plant
  • purification
  • filtration
  • chemical treatment
  • impurities
  • microorganisms
  • distribution system
  • potable water
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